I decided to give my other book: The Legacy of Dread Wood, a break so when I came back to it I'd be looking at it with knew eyes and could spot out mistakes like a different reader could.
I haven't given a title to this knew story, and this time I'm writing it on paper. It's slightly inspired by a book I just read before I started to write the story: Smith of Wootton Major, which is by J.R.R. Tolkien.
The story starts around 100 years after when Narrhen died and became a Saint with his ancestors, and then another 200 years pass and there is a boy named Dorcén who decides he wants to go out adventuring, which is totally unlike his other family members (which is also totally unlike Narrhen, but his descendants decided to settle down after Narrhen's glory). Dorcén then goes off, first into the nearby forest, just like his great great grandfather, and then, I don't know yet! I have just written one a little bit of compute pages! He's so far still in the forest. Below is a little excerpt of my first draft (I haven't edited it or reviewed it at all):
The descendants of Narrhen lived in a grand house near the edge of a forest, as Narrhen chose to live next to a forest when he was older. It was to remind him of his days in Dread Wood.
And Narrhen's descendants didn't change where they lived: they stayed, and most didn't have that same adventuring spirit like Narrhen did...
Copyright Jude Moloney, 2017
I hope you like it and happy gaming!
Hon
Darnanc: Batalionar eenee were tharc.
Definition: A man that fights.
I haven't given a title to this knew story, and this time I'm writing it on paper. It's slightly inspired by a book I just read before I started to write the story: Smith of Wootton Major, which is by J.R.R. Tolkien.
The story starts around 100 years after when Narrhen died and became a Saint with his ancestors, and then another 200 years pass and there is a boy named Dorcén who decides he wants to go out adventuring, which is totally unlike his other family members (which is also totally unlike Narrhen, but his descendants decided to settle down after Narrhen's glory). Dorcén then goes off, first into the nearby forest, just like his great great grandfather, and then, I don't know yet! I have just written one a little bit of compute pages! He's so far still in the forest. Below is a little excerpt of my first draft (I haven't edited it or reviewed it at all):
The descendants of Narrhen lived in a grand house near the edge of a forest, as Narrhen chose to live next to a forest when he was older. It was to remind him of his days in Dread Wood.
And Narrhen's descendants didn't change where they lived: they stayed, and most didn't have that same adventuring spirit like Narrhen did...
Copyright Jude Moloney, 2017
I hope you like it and happy gaming!
Hon
Darnanc: Batalionar eenee were tharc.
Definition: A man that fights.